Y is for yelp and other sounds characters make. Other sounds include, but are not limited to: squeal, squeak, grunt, bark, snarl,
growl, hiss and whimper.
One of my favorite writers, Anne Bishop, is particularly prone to making her characters snarl, growl and whimper. On rare occasions it annoys me.
But other writers, ones I like less, have their characters grunt and growl their way through the page. It is beyond annoying, and may lead to me putting the book down. It’s just so irritating – no one grunts/growls/barks every sentence they say. And if they do, there is still no need to put these tags in every other bit of dialogue.
Also, sometimes even with the dialogue tag, I cannot hear the sentence as a grown/grunt/whimper.
Does this annoy you? And, whether it does or doesn’t, can you always hear the sound in the dialogue?