Short Story · Writing

Succinctly Yours: a Day at the Park

Succinctly Yours is a weekly meme by grandma. Of this meme she says:

How low can you go?

Use the photo as inspiration for a story of 140 characters OR 140 words. It doesn’t have to be exactly 140, just not more. This one is 139 characters.

Giggling, my two-year old daughter ran toward the geese. She stopped, baffled, when they flew off. I threw a lavender ball to distract her.


21 thoughts on “Succinctly Yours: a Day at the Park

  1. one-thirty-nine
    just under the line
    as close as it can be —
    just perfectly fine
    at one-thirty-nine
    at least, if you ask me!
    The little girl is lucky you threw the ball to distract her because, if the geese hadn’t flown off, they might have attacked her. They can be pretty ferocious, and they bite!
    — K

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous Travel

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