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Succinctly Yours: Distracting Sights

Succinctly Yours is a weekly meme by grandma. Of this meme she says:

How low can you go?

Use the photo as inspiration for a story of 140 characters OR 140 words. It doesn’t have to be exactly 140, just not more. This one is 138 characters.

I needed to focus on the presentation, but all I could think about was how hot my partner looked in his suit. I couldn’t wait to get home.


30 thoughts on “Succinctly Yours: Distracting Sights

  1. Ah, she must be thinking of the man behind her, while the guy in the blue suit is obviously thinking about her.
    Good one!
    — K

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous Travel

  2. Hey Sonia ~~ I don’t think either of them are focusing on the presentation. The guys have the hots for each other, hang the lady. 🙂

  3. I did enjoy that, and particularly liked the ambiguity! It’s not altogether clear just who, out of the three of them, fancies whom…it’s a cheeky little piece…LOL!

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