No idea how many words this has, but I hope you like.
Sweet, noxious scented liquid poured into the water. She smiled when he climbed in beside her. Their thighs brushed.
Noxious-scented steam rose around them. She a took a deep, relaxing breath. She needed this.
Already, his eyes looked glazed. He
reached for her and she let him tug her deeper into the tub.
He sank under the surface, the most peaceful expression on his face.
So sweet, she thought, and considered which dressing to use on him. Something tart and lemony.
Bon(er) appetit! LOL
Cleverly drawn, nice twist at the end.
LOL Thanks Larry!
I figured she was going to drown him, but at least she has plans for the body!
Yes, very tasty plans
I hope she doesn’t get indigestion! LOL
I don’t know, I kind of hope she does. LOL
Macarbe.
Yes
ohhhhhhhhh that was evil!!!! Loved loved loved that twist
Have a wonderful day,
Sylvia @ Playful Creative
Thanks Sylvia!
Nice reveal. Maybe a side salad would would add a touch of colour to the meal too?
LOL Probably it would.
I like the way this touches on none of the horror of the situation but rather on the sensuality of the senses and seems to capture her viewpoint that nothing she’s done is wrong. She is not someone I would want to cross.
Thanks! I was going for sensuality!
o0 Yay! ^^ More disturbing!
But I am saddened slightly it isn’t continuing the Dust Rider story… *will keep prodding for more*
Thanks.
Maybe later I will write something.
Oh the twist! An evil tale, that is disturbingly calmly written. Macabre indeed!
Thanks Cindy!
I’m with Steve. Some salad would be a good idea
. Maybe something Greek? Great story.
LOL Thanks Craig
Sweet scent and a tart dressing. Seems like a delightful mix.
Thanks Tim
Would something tart and lemony go better with a fresh meal rather than boiled?
Hmm. Probably. They might add a fresh flavor.
Wow, is she just boiling him? Creepy but well-written!
Yes! Thanks Icy!
Hehe! Deliciously delightful!
Thanks Cherie!
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