Part five in my Friday flash series experiment! Parts one, two, three and four here. Part six next week.
He freed Gazelle and she jumped down. The dirt was firm, undoubtedly tamped down from the passage hundreds of dust devils.
“That way.” The dust rider pointed at people clustered around the bonfire. “Go.”
She hoisted her bag over one shoulder and walked. She was stiff, achy and cold from the long ride. She hoped she could sleep soon.
She pushed as close to the fire as she dared; it felt good on her chilled skin.
“Careful!” A boy about her own age grabbed her elbow and yanked her back.
“What -”
“You almost stepped on them.” He pointed at the ground.
Gazelle looked down. Eggs. Large, sand-colored, vibrating eggs lay in a heap. They were so close to the fire it was a wonder they didn’t burn. Or cook. Maybe this was an odd dust rider cooking method. She thought longingly of scrambled eggs.
She didn’t know how she’d missed them before.
Even as she watched, a tiny crack appeared in the egg in front of her. A small bit of shell fell away and a slender brown tail slipped through. It waved wildly, banging itself against the shell, and the shell broke apart. A small, glistening wet dust devil cried into the night air.
Gazelle gaped. A dust devil hatching. Who would have guessed?
All around her, the other eggs hatched. Soon the air was filled with the shrill screeching of the new-born dust devils.
The one she was watching suddenly quieted, studied her with one blue eye and then leaped at her. She stumbled back and threw up an arm over her face.
Claws tore into her scalp and sharp teeth tore into her shoulder. Gazelle screamed. It thrust its strong, slender tail into her mouth.
Gazelle scrabbled at the creature. But her fingers slipped on the wet scales and she could not pull free.
She bit the creature’s tail and sharp pain bloomed on her shoulder. Her sight went dark and she knew she was dying.
They’ll tell Papa I died during training.
The baby devil spit saliva on her shoulder. It rolled down her back, leaving only cool numbness behind.
Treacherous Rider.
This just keeps getting more intriguing! So are dust devils a kind of dragon?
kind of, but without wings. More Chinese than the usual western kind, but not really a Chinese dragon.
Holy cow! I love that dust devils are born like that!
Thanks Danielle!!
This is going to be her dust devil, isn’t it? What exactly do dust devil riders do, that’s what I keep wondering? This is coming along nicely.
Yep! You know, I am not entirely sure. I think they are rulers/warriors/messengers of some sort.
I cannot help continuously imagining the dust devil as a little tornado of dirt, which makes every installment more adorable.
lol Picturing a baby tornado eating someone now.
I’m with Helen. She has found her dust devil. I like how each episode twists and turns and introduces something new and shiny. Dust devil babies are cute.
I’m with the “It’s HER Dust Devil” brigade. I think they choose their partner, like the Banshees in Avatar.
I think you are right.
Wow, that’s a scary ending! And a very descriptive story. I’ll have to look at the other installments!
Meanwhile, my Friday Fictioneers story – http://newpillowbook.wordpress.com/2012/05/25/friday-fictioneers-losers/
Hope you do!
Such a wonderfully visual piece. I really like this.
Thanks Sandra!
…shivers down my spine. I hope Gazelle doesn’t lose this fight.
Anyway, I’ll be back to see how it ends.
Here’s my flash fiction: http://logo-ligi.com/2012/05/25/mothballs/
next Friday! Or Thursday night, possibly.
Wow, I love this story and it amazes me the things you’re dreaming up for it. Loved it!
Thanks Madison!
That was kind of cute before the baby began eating or hopefully choosing her.
I chose to tag you for the Lucky 7 meme
thanks emilia! Only before huh?
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YOWZA! I got the feel of a wet tail in my mouth while reading. Ick! If that’s the babe that chooses her, it’ll be a very interesting relationship! HEE!
Kathy
Ohhh thanks!!!
I thinking that’s her Dust Devil too. Hopefully it’ll learn to behave!
It’s a baby – it might be a while.
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